Kobe Bryant who is an American retired professional basketball player . He played his entire 20-year career with the Los Angeles Lakers of the NBA . Also he is my favorite basketball player , about his records are too much to say . For example :he have five NBA champions , two NBA Finals MVP , NBA most valuable player ,eighteen times NBA ALL STAR ,four times NBA ALL STAR MVP , eleven times ALL-NBA First team , two times NBA Second team , two times NBA Third team ,nines times NBA ALL-Defensive First team ,three times NBA ALL-Defensive Second team ,two times NBA Scoring champion ,NBA Slam Dunk Contest champion ,NBA ALL-Rookie Second team ,Naisimith Prep Player of the year.
So absolutely he was a great basketball player . But actually the reason he let people respect is his work hard spirit,even if he is a genius he still work hard than other people .That is why he can become a great NBA player .Because he is a work hard genius and also he never give up.About his professionalism he wake up 4p.m. everyday to work out and training , also his training time always more than other player.So his success is not lucky ,is he strive for it .And about his spirit of never give up ,he received a lot of different injury . Especially some injury were serious ,but he still efforts to revive .He can rehabilitation everyday and not afraid of pain ,just for as soon as possible to back to basketball court.His professionalism is the reason why his fans like .He prove hiself can back to game everytime and have better performance to his fans.
Don
ReplyDeletemistake sentence:For example :he have five NBA champions , two NBA Finals MVP , NBA most valuable player ,eighteen times NBA ALL STAR ,four times NBA ALL STAR MVP , eleven times ALL-NBA First team , two times NBA Second team , two times NBA Third team ,nines times NBA ALL-Defensive First team ,three times NBA ALL-Defensive Second team ,two times NBA Scoring champion ,NBA Slam Dunk Contest champion ,NBA ALL-Rookie Second team ,Naisimith Prep Player of the year.
corrected: For example,he has five NBA champions , two NBA Finals MVP , NBA most valuable player ,eighteen times NBA ALL STAR ,four times NBA ALL STAR MVP , eleven times ALL-NBA First team , two times NBA Second team , two times NBA Third team ,nine times NBA ALL-Defensive First team ,three times NBA ALL-Defensive Second team ,two times NBA Scoring champion ,NBA Slam Dunk Contest champion ,NBA ALL-Rookie Second team ,Naisimith Prep Player of the year.
Don
ReplyDeletemistake: But actually the reason he let people respect is his work hard spirit,even if he is a genius he still work hard than other people .
corrected: But actually the reason is he let people respect is his work hard spirit,even if he is a genius, he still work hard than other people .
Don
ReplyDeletemistake: Because he is a work hard genius and also he never give up.About his professionalism he wake up 4p.m. everyday to work out and training , also his training time always more than other player
corrected: Because he is a work hard genius and also he never give up.About his professionalism he wake up 4p.m. everyday to work out and training , also he always training time more than other player
Don
ReplyDeletemistake:So his success is not lucky ,is he strive for it
corrected:So his success is not lucky ,he is strive for it
Samah:
ReplyDeleteYou wrote: “ For example :he have five NBA champions ”
You should have written: “ For example, he has five NBA champions ”