Sunday, February 26, 2017

effect of being married-Yurika

              Recently, we have studied about benefits of nutrition for our health. We have made decisions what to eat and how to eat by based on our beliefs. Now, I wonder that only food can influence our health? Definitely, the answer is no. There are many ways to be influenced our health. I read some article about our health, and I found some interesting article. In the article, “Married People”, says that if you have married, you are healthier than single people. Whether or not you have married can influence our health. There are some reasons why it can influence our health.
              First, being married decrease your stress level. Some experts have experimented that how people who have married feel stress in one day. The result was that the people who have married feel less stress than single people. This investigation was not the first time to experiment about the relationship between being married to our health, but it is the only one to compare between married people and single people. Unlike the people who are single, the result was that married people less likely to being heart disease than single people. In addition, I read some Japanese article about how influenced our health by being married. In the article, the author says that being married influence especially for the male because most of the male less likely to go to the hospital by themselves. Unless the wife requires going to the hospital to husband, the husband won’t go to the hospital. So, being married simply provides the opportunity to go to the hospital.
              In the other hands, some people say that being married is more stressful than being single. They think that it can bring the problem of money. According to my friend, he says that my wife always complains about my salary, it is stressful and annoying. Also, he says that I don’t have time to do my hobby.  In Japanese, there is some word that explains about being married, “Marrying is the cemetery of life”. Of cause, it depends on the person. Indeed, there is the fact that some married people have felt stress their partners' complaints.

              In my opinion, I think that being married can influence our health in the good way and bad way. Also, I think that if there are a person who shares a meal with me, it can be happy. Also, I think that being happy is more likely to influence our health!!

8 comments:

  1. Jinju:
    You wrote: " First, being married decrease your stress level."
    You should have written: " First, being married decreases your stress level."

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  2. Samah:
    You wrote: “Also, I think that if there are a person who shares a meal with me, it can be happy.”
    You should have written: “Also, I think that if there is a person who shares a meal with me, it can be happy.”

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  3. Yurika
    you wrote"there is some word that explains about being married,"
    you should written"there is a word that explains about being married,"

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  4. Abdulwahab:
    you wrote : "We have made decisions what to eat and how to eat by based on our beliefs"

    you should have written: We have made decisions about what to eat and how to eat based on our beliefs

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  5. Lei
    You wrote:" I read some article about our health, and I found some interesting article."
    You should have written: " I read some articles about our health, and I found some interesting articles."

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  6. shiho
    you wrote "There are many ways to be influenced our health. "
    you should have written "There are many ways to influence our health. "

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  7. Abdulwahab:

    you wrote : "Now, I wonder that only food can influence our health"

    you should have written : Now, I am wondering if the food is the only thing that can influence our health .

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  8. Ryosuke Okumura
    You wrote:", the author says that being married influence especially for the male because most of the male less likely to go to the hospital by themselves".
    You should have written:", the author says that being married influence especially male because most male less likely to go to the hospital by themselves".

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